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Purple Splatter by t-e-z-z Purple Splatter by t-e-z-z
Playing with the splatter effect at the moment......

Food colouring, fineliner, Edited on GIMP
Critique by BombPrincess Nov 19, 2012, 5:53:39 AM
Pretty much all of the critique for this piece is in regards to her anatomy.
That you used food coloring for this is very interesting! The purple is a great shade, and it's refreshing that you didn't color in or shade the rest of her body, because it allows the purple to rule. I think this piece is a great start!
Her anatomy is just off in a few places. I think it would be worth your while to use some reference pictures until you get a handle on anatomy (artists never stop using reference pictures, no matter how good they get, so you should never be afraid to use them).
Here are a few quick pointers:
~Her jawline is very long, making her face look more masculine than what you probably want.
~Her shoulders are much wider than her hips. A genereal rule of thumb with drawing women is that their shoulders and their hips should be about the same width.
~Her breasts are very high up on her torso. Also, her groin is undefined. Next time, you should take care to leave a small triangle to remind you where her groin is, that way it doesn't disappear into her clothing. Her shorts should fold around her groin.
I think this is a beautiful start, and once you get a handle on your anatomy, I think you will go far as an artist! Keep up the good work!
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November 19, 2012
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